reflection of my pitch

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7uQN7CvC7o

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zl_5PkGU1mw

1.

I thought of having twins is a good idea because it will allow me to increase the technicality of the music. The way you will be able to see the difference the music is the attire and their hair styles. To make this happen I will need to use green screen. The green screen will be used in the music when one of he twins is going out of the house. This will be quite hard as I will need quite a few people to help me out with the shot. To improve my music video I get rid of the twins in the video and just get 2 different people for the music video sot that it makes it practically easier to do the music video. Also having 1 Goodwin which is amplifying. During the music I could used the performance during only the flash back and also and the destruction of the party so that it does not take off the focus.    

2.

My target audience of my music video will be 15-30. I think this would work because most elder people do not have any interest in parties, whereas younger audience like parties and I also think that the audience identified that as well during my Q/A part. I think during my music I will make the younger audience gain easily the interest to watch the video. I believe that my audience identified that it would be a great idea of having twins because it is very different to other music videos. I also think that the audience thought that the music video link to my original idea in some ways. 

3.

I know that that the audience identified that there was a very complex storyline to my music video. This is because I had too much to put in for the music video. This is one of the areas that I could improve a lot by. Also the cast made the audience really confused because they did not know who they are and why I chose them. This means that I will have to choose the cast the cast I know next time .I know that the audience had quite a lot of quire of one of my location which was the snooker hall.

4.

The improvement that I know I will make is to get rid of the twins in the video and just get 2 different people for the music video sot that it makes it practically easier to do the music video. Also the cast I will make a change of in terms of getting the people I know better because I know their timetable better. I will get rid of one of my locations this because I will not need the location of one my location is the snooker and that is unnecessary for a music video it will make it harder practically. 

group rationale

My music video pitch

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7uQN7CvC7o

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zl_5PkGU1mw 

artist permision

I have chose to ask permission for Aniseed Treats as I want to make a music for under £67 pounds. The reason why i chose their song is because I think it is a easy song to understand. The song tells us about a party. In the video I was thinking of having the artist do a birthday party as it will be his. But does not in the end because somebody end up messes up his birthday party by ripping the decorations and smash up food.

The problem that I would be facing is that not I might have to brake a rules because I will need to tell whose party it is. This will subtitle for the music for the dialogue.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-95hyM2kAAI

2nd permission
http://www.mp3unsigned.com/ArtistPage.aspx?bandid=25787&trackid=85752#Love+Lies

The song that I ask permission for is the artist called  Tuesday paradox. the song that I chose from them is called "love Lies." The reason why I chose this is because I make could make a narrative story line  a love story. In the music video it will denote the artist trying to tell his love for his girlfriend but does not. In the end they brake up. The problem that I would be facing is that i will need to find a person to do it because not everyone wants to seen from you tube.


3RD PERMISSION

http://www.mp3unsigned.com/Pidgeman/53393/#Forever

The song that I ask permission for is the artist called  Pidgeman. The song that I chose from them is called "love Lies." The reason why I chose this is because I make could make a narrative story line  a love story In the music video it will denote the artist tells his love for his girlfriend. After that his girlfriend dies and the artist tries to find out who did but does not in the end. the problem with this song is that not everyone want to do an emotional song video.

Goodwin

illustrating

They are types of songs that directly correspond to the lyric. This means that the song links with the lyrics and is basically shown on the song. An example of a song that illustrates that is called "Macklemore Thrift Shop." The reason why this song is an illustrative song is because they correspond the lines from their lyric to the music video. You can check by these time: 1 minute 06 seconds, 1 minute:10 seconds, 1 minute:24 seconds and also 1 minute:29 seconds. In these moment the music video visually correspond on to what the lyrics says. This illustrates that this is a illustrative song.

Star Persona

They are the types of songs that mainly focuses the artist face, to make the audience think that the artist is looking at them directly. An example of a song that illustrates that, is called Eminem rap god. The reason why this song is a star persona is because the song mainly focuses on the artist face. You can check by the time of 10 seconds and more. In the moment we see how the artist is the star persona because there are lots of close ups of his face. This illustrates that this is a star persona song.

contradict 

it is a type of music that contradict to what the lyrics are saying. an example of a song that does that is called the weekend the hills. the reason is because none of the words the artist is saying reflects to what he is doing in the video. you can check in these moment 10 seconds and 1 minute and 34 seconds. In these moments we see how the music is being contradicted.This illustrates that this is a contradictive song.

Amplifying

It is a type of song in which does two styles together in one music video which is a performance and also a narrative. An example of a song that illustrates that is called. The reason why this song is a amplifying song is because it show some performance elements and narrative elements.You can check by the time of 8 seconds seconds and 26 seconds. In these moment we see how the song relate to it. this shows that this son is a amplifying song.

iconography and genre convention

It is, a type of song that has a lot of convention of such as hip pop. An example of a hip pop would be "Chris Brown Marijuanna." The reason why this song is a genre convention is because they do lots of conventions in a song. You can check by these time: 0:19 seconds, 0:31 seconds and 1 minute and 21 seconds. In the moment we see how this song relates to Iconography and Genre Convention because there are lots of girls, drugs, dance. This show this is iconography music video.

Intertextuality

It is, a type of song that references to another video.  An example of a song that illustrates that is called Sam Smith Writing on the Wall. The reason why this song is a intertextuality is because they do lots of reference in the song. You can check by these time: 0:14 seconds, 0:33 seconds and 1 minute and 21 seconds. In these moments we see how this song relates to intertextuality. This shows that this song is a intertextuality.

Voyeurism

A voyeurism is a type of song which shows woman wearing minimal clothing. An example of a song that illustrates that is called Arctic monkey snap out of it. The reason why this song is voyeuristic because the woman is presented in a voyeuristic way. You can check by these time: 0:19 seconds, 0:31 seconds and 3 minute and 19 seconds. In these moments we see how this song relates to voyeurism. this show that this song has some thing to do with voyeurism.

special effects, lips syncing and camera language

Special effects

Special effects are a type of music videos that enhances the music video. One special affect would be Green screen.

A good example is Cheryl Cole Promise This. In the music video they use the green screen effectively to make the video look better. You can check by the time of 23 seconds and 56 seconds. In these moments the music video uses green screen effectively. This shows that this song is good.

A bad example is called "bring me the horizon never ends." The reason is because the green screen does not look great and that the green screen did not fit exactly on their location that they are at. You can check the time of 25 seconds where the screen effect goes wrong. this show that this song has a lack of good special effects.

Lips syncing

Lips syncing is when a artist is only using mouth movement but not actually singing it is just fake singing.

A good example is called Katie Perry Roar. In the music video they use the lips syncing very well through their expression and also their to every words they are sing. You can check by the time of 23 seconds and 56 seconds.

This is a bad example and it is called. The reason is because the the timing of their lips syncing completely wrong. also the lips syncing looks a little off. You can check at the time of 12 and 17 seconds. This show that this not a good song at all.

camera language

It is a type of song which show varieties of camera shots

A good example of a song that does good in their camera language is called. the reason is because they do lots of camera shots through out of the music video. You can at these timing which are the following 22 seconds, 24 seconds 25 seconds and 26 seconds. This shows that this is great example of good camera language




This is a bad example because their are way too may of the same shot. There are not enough variety of camera shots. You can check from 1 minute to 1 min and 30 seconds. This shows that this song has a lack of shots.

creating my artist identity

names
George will aidan and matty
brighton
they met each other in brighton  and they form together as a band from October 2013

Gender; male

clothing

some of the clothing that i would like my artist to wear.

 The reason why I have chosen casual clothing is because I want my artist look like a teenager. The reason why i want my artist to look like a teenager is because i want to make my artist look young.

colours

The reason why I had chose these colours is because I want my artist to a certain mood to towards to the music video which is darkness. This darkness will make the audience wanna know who the music actor is.  

typography









The why i have chosen this typography is because during the music video my artist will relate to each of these things to his personality toward his target audience.

mise en scene






               
barking lake during the night time
brookside

snooker place

The artist that chose why i chose this artist is because he can alters his emotion a lot. also he would be a great character because he knows how to act. he is also quite a good lip singer.

valentimes park during day the brigde